Hey everyone, this week in Six Sentence Sunday #sixsunday:

Here are six sentences taken from my serial novel:
The Bulletproof Adventures of Damian Stockwell: Horror in Hoduras

Damian Stockwell, captain-of-industry, PhD, man-of-action, awoke entwined in frilly, pink sheets. Lace curtains hung from the bed’s canopy and filtered the early morning light into a soft glow as it began to break through the window.

Years had passed since he had experienced any transition between asleep and alert. Through dedicated practice and sheer force of will he had trained himself to be fully aware of his surroundings the moment his eyes opened. The ability had saved his life countless times. Cowards were not uncommon in the world and they would sooner strike the helpless than confront a conscious man.

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- ben

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Welcome everyone. Here’s the Sweet Saturday Sample: #SweetSat


Taken from my serial novel
The Bulletproof Adventures of Damian Stockwell: Horror in Hoduras

Damian stood and rushed in amongst the exhibits. Perhaps in the maze of displays he could gain an advantage on the machine-like man that stalked him.

Tools, weapons and vehicles of deranged madmen from across the globe filled the room. Though he appreciated the opportunity and any advantage it may provide him, it was a dangerous place to have led a possessed Frenchman wearing a creepy mask.

Bertrand dropped the club and moved to a weapons rack. In its display were several African spears Damian had brought back after defeating his, what the newspapers had called, “Nemesis in Natal.”

The long spear cut through the air with a confusing sound. The shaft warbled like the flexing of a strip of sheet metal while the spearhead produced a shrill whistle. The combination of the two sounds made it difficult to judge the speed of the missile.

Stockwell dove for a totem pole he had saved from “The Inuit Incident” hoping the carved animals would shield him.

The tip of the spear embedded itself in the face of a smiling beaver and sheared a tooth from the carving. Stockwell tried to pull the weapon free and turn it on his murderous friend, but the blade had buried itself deep between the beaver’s over-pronounced teeth.

Bertrand threw another spear. The warble roared and the whistle screamed across the room. Stockwell slid behind a monolith that had been a key clue to the “Evil on Easter Island.”

The spear struck the rock and threw off a cascade of sparks as it was deflected far out of Damian’s grasp. Bertrand grabbed another spear from the rack. Stockwell cursed himself for not bolting the weapons down or mounting a “do not throw in the house” sign on the rack itself. He rushed across the room weaving in and out of the various trophies. He leapt over a bed of nails from the “Insanity in India,” vaulted over a pommel horse from the time he went up against “The Genocidal Gymnast” and slid behind a gong that had been the centerpiece of an evil emperor’s lair in “That Thingapore in Singapore.” The papers weren’t always clever.

The third spear struck the gong just as he stopped behind it. The sound was deafening. In the cavernous room the ring bounced off the polished floor and metal displays. He clasped his hands over his ears and fell to the ground. Then he saw it. The reflection in a giant mirror that had once been the property of “The Vain Villain” showed Bertrand grasping at his own ears behind the mask.

Damian Stockwell kicked the gong. This sound was louder than the spear strike. He kicked again, jumped to his feet and ran to the “Chaos in Camelot” display and grabbed a shield from a suit of armor. Behind the safety of the shield, he advanced.

The gong faded, Bertrand recovered and returned to the spear rack. He hurled one after another at the approaching Stockwell.

The impact of each was not slight. The shield bucked in his hand with every strike. Yet, he advanced quickly, deflecting spears until the South African weapons rack was all but empty.

Bertrand held the last spear in front of him and the two warriors collided.

Stockwell battered and bashed the Frenchman with the shield as the valet struck against the metal with the spear.

The weight of the shield and the force of the blows tired both combatants. Even the influence of the mask could not overcome the tremendous fatigue both men suffered.

Bertrand dropped the spear and tore the shield from Stockwell’s hands. The Frenchman lowered his head and drove his shoulder into his employer, lifting him from the ground as he charged across the room.

The charge ended at the window. The sill caught Stockwell just above the waistline. His back and shoulders shattered the glass. He grabbed the mask and placed his foot on the valet’s chest. A powerful shove forced the Frenchman back as the mask finally released its hold. The momentum carried Damian’s arm out the broken window. His grip on the mask had been tenuous and despite the force of the kick it had struggled to remain in place and weakened his grip. The mask sailed out into the air above the street.

It never struck the road. It dissolved in midair. One moment the mask had been whole and hideous. The next it was a flash of green mist. It was gone.

Stockwell cursed. In his lab the mask would have revealed its secrets.

Bertrand groaned.

Damian grabbed him by the elbow and helped him stand. “Are you okay, my friend?”

“It feels like someone tried to rip my face off.”
“Yes. That was me. You’re welcome.”
The valet looked confused as he surveyed the trophy room. Then he held up his bloodied hands. The pain began to show on his face.
“Monsieur, what is this? What happened to my hands?”
“Well, you punched a lot of glass and things.”
He winced as he touched the glass shards protruding from his hands. “Mon dieu. What is going on?”

“I don’t know, my loyal friend. But, we’re going to find out. You’ll want to tend to those hands before we head to South America.”
“South America. Where in South America?”
“I don’t know. I was still examining the DV when you put your fist through it.”
“I did what?” The Frenchman was shocked. “I remember nothing except looking at the mask in the box.”
“You don’t remember putting on the mask and going all Frenchy crazy
on me?”

The Frenchman shook his head. He blushed to hear of his actions.

“Hmmm. I’d already deduced that the mask had an effect on your nervous system, but this sudden amnesic episode must mean that it made you stupid as well.”

“I do apologize, monsieur.”

“No apologies are necessary, my friend. Aside from putting on the mask and trying to kill me, none of this is your fault. But, we must get to the bottom of this. It’s a shame the mask disintegrated and took its secrets with it.”

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Thanks for reading
- ben

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1. Why do you think I need a great cover? I wrote a great book. Isn’t that enough?

A great book cover can convince people to spend money on you and your story. A great cover is the 1st and sometimes only chance that a person has to see inside your novel, especially with e-books. You want readers to understand your story and your genre as quickly as possible. A person browsing through e-books will spend something like 3 – 8 seconds looking at the cover before moving on.  A great conceptual book cover will make people linger a while longer, reading your description, the reviews of your book, and then clicking ‘BUY NOW’.

2. Could you show us some of your work?
Sure, I’ve designed both of Benjamin Wallace’s novels, plus working on his 3rd full length novel. In the meantime setting up a “look & feel” so that these books can become a series.

     
All the work I’ve done for Ben and just a smidgeon of the other work I’ve done in my career is at crystalroznik.com

3. Since you’re not doing these designs in crayon and macaroni, I’m guessing you’ve got a background in art and/or design. Could you tell us about your background?
I personally have been designing long before college, with crayons and macaroni, and my mom loved it. But I do have a Bachelor of Fine Arts in Communication Design from the University of North Texas (fancy). Communication Design is a broad term for everything graphic design, advertising, web design, art direction & publication design. I’ve been out of college and been designing professionally without macaroni for 4 years. I’ve designed in big agencies (yes kinda like Mad Men) everything from multi-page websites to holiday cards, company logos to packaging, and Olympic novelty pins to “Can you photoshop the boss’s head onto a llama?”.

4. How do you work with an author to create a book cover concept? Do you read the book?
Some clients already have a “vision”, which CAN help if they explain it so that I can see the “vision” too. Others don’t know what they are looking for so I’ve set up 10 simple questions to help all kinds of authors realize what they want and/or how to explain it to me so that I can make awesomeness.

I usually like to give the author 3 main options with several different color options (the colors let you see how this can work in a series if need be).
And no I don’t read your book. Sorry. I can read, but the stuff I read falls under 3 categories; blogs, cereal boxes & “101 Crochet Patterns” (and I still don’t finish them). One of the questions I ask is to give me a synopsis of your book. I do WANT to know what your book is about and what makes it unique.

Yes, I will buy your book. It’s my way of giving you a discount and boosting your rankings.

5. Let’s pretend I’m an author, what kind of information could I give you that would help lead to a great cover?
In my “10 questions for the Author” Questionnaire I ask 3 questions (besides the synopsis) that help me visualize your cover, and what you are expecting. I’m not going to use everything you say, but I will take the info you have provided and narrow in on what you are looking for.

• What are some other book covers you like in that genre/category? Other author’s books that you admire?

• Specific imagery from the book. (Are there islands, monkeys, mermaids, boats, bombs, vampires, dude with a cool scar, a robot with a creepy mustache, etc.)

• How do you picture the cover? Is there anything specific that you want on the cover? Do you already have a “vision”? Do you have any preconceived ideas?

6. Why couldn’t I just grab an image off the web and make my own cover? I’ve got PowerPoint on my computer, you know. I’m pretty handy in it. People at work love my pie charts and graphs. You should see the Q4 report I did last year. It had 94 builds!
Because it’s not your image. Grabbing an image off the web is dangerous, and you don’t know where it came from and you don’t know if that person will see it and get super-pissed, like that’s-copyrighted-gonna-sue-you pissed.

If you need an image, some covers don’t, they can come from several valid places like you (if you draw), stock imagery or me.

Also I don’t care how much of a PowerPoint blackbelt you are. You don’t want a pie chart for your cover, that’s boring, almost as boring as Q4 reports.

7. As an author, I’m curious, what kind of things could I ask for that would be unreasonable and completely annoy you?
• Using someone else’s image – I won’t use any image if I don’t know where it came from
• Wanting it tomorrow – I can do tomorrow, but it’ll cost you your full cooperation and a lot of money.
• Asking me to use one of these overused ugly ass fonts (copperplate, comic sans, hobo, impact, papyrus, curlz, & times new roman). There are many other overused fonts, but those are less annoying for a designer. Designers have thousands of fonts at our disposal, another reason to use a professional.

8. Let’s talk money. How much are we talking here?
$200 -$300 plus the price of images (if needed). This includes:
•    1st round is type. How do you want your name/title to look? (this is all black type on white background)
•    2nd round is your first look at the 3 options.
•    Rounds 3 and 4 are me and you finessing the cover together.
•    Then you get full resolution covers
•    The whole process takes roughly 2 weeks

9. Why shouldn’t I just get one of those crappy, pre-designed covers that are so cheap? Hint: The correct answer here involves some form of the phrase, because they’re crappy.
You want to stand out from the rest of the books on the digital shelf. You want your cover to tell your story not a cheap boring pre-designed story. And because they’re crappy.

10. Is there anything else you would like to add?
French fries and a chocolate shake.

Hey everyone, this week in Six Sentence Sunday #sixsunday:


Here are six sentences from:
Tortugas Rising

Paul annoys Rick Savage, Head of Security:

“I will not allow my guests to carry weapons.”
“I’m licensed to carry this weapon within the United States, and we are still in the United States, right?”
“Yes. But, you don’t need it.”
“I already needed it once today, Rickie.” Paul smiled broadly, enjoying the frustration in Savage’s voice.

Wanna hear more from Paul? Check out an audio interview with him below. Also, buy Tortugas Rising or borrow it for FREE on amazon.

Thanks for reading
- ben

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Welcome everyone. Here’s the Sweet Saturday Sample: #SweetSat


Taken from
Tortugas Rising

The faint sound of a distant engine piqued their ears. It grew louder.

Steve scrambled to turn the key but lost it in his panic. He padded around the dashboard trying to find it.

The approaching engine roared and the boat came around the corner of the nearby island. Steve focused and found the key, but, before he could turn it, the boat was upon them and slowing.

It was different. Smaller. The boat drifted next to the jet-boat and the engine died. He had seen it and others like it at the dock – an ImagiNation water taxi. A figure appeared in the canopy’s opening.

“You know boats are surprisingly easy to hot-wire.”
“Paul! Thank god you’re… you stole a boat?”
“You left me alone. I needed something to do.”
“Is there a radio in that thing?”

“Yeah, but I think we’re too far from Key West to get FM. And, you two look like you’re doing fine without the soft music.”
Steve hadn’t even noticed that Katherine had grabbed his arm when they first heard Paul’s boat. “Call security! We’ve been shot at.”

“Get in the boat.” Paul’s constant smirk vanished. With the order given, he disappeared into the cabin.

Steve jumped into the ImagiNation water taxi, and helped Katherine aboard. As she boarded he asked, “Can you work the radio?”

“Yes.” She moved forward to the cabin.

“Who shot at you?” Paul moved from one side of the passenger craft to the other, peering into the now black night.

“Don’t know. They dressed in black, shot guns, and didn’t give their names.”

Katherine studied the radio and flicked the power switch several times. “Nothing. The radio is dead. Almost as if it’s shorted out.” She turned to Paul. Paul could feel her stare. Steve was glaring as well.

“Okay, so, maybe it’s not as easy to hot-wire a boat as I thought.”

“Back into the Sea-Doo. It’s got to be faster than this thing. Chances are they still haven’t a clue as to where we are.” Steve ushered Katherine out of the water taxi. Paul moved forward to the cabin.

“Now, Paul.”

“Go ahead. Just let me get this thing moving in the other direction. Then come and get me.” He moved toward the cabin and Steve jumped back into the Sea-Doo. He waited for Paul to start the taxi’s engine, and turned the key on the Islandia. The water taxi’s engine roared and it began to move. A moment later Paul was in the water. Steve pulled alongside and fished his friend from the Gulf.

Paul wiped the water from his face. “At the very least, we should be a little harder to hear now. Tell your girl to keep it slow, and maybe they’ll go for the noisy one.” He settled into one of the seats behind the cockpit and was quiet. But, only for a moment. “Only you could inherit a billion dollar fortune, come to paradise, meet a hot girl, and screw it all up by getting shot at. You at least did it first, right?”

“Dude.”

“Just asking.” His voice faded off. “Hoping. Whatever. It’s been a while for you.”

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Thanks for reading
- ben

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For more from Paul, buy Tortugas Rising on amazon today.
Amazon prime members can borrow it for FREE.

WARNING for the sensitive: Paul uses what some people call “language.”


1. So, what’s your book all about?

Forbidden Love follows the Romeo & Juliet theme of star-crossed lovers kept apart by opposing families . . . but unlike Shakespeare’s version, the two opposing families are power players in organized crime. And if that wasn’t enough, there’s an unknown force using this forbidden love to his own advantage.

2. What inspired you to write this tale?
What inspired me to write Forbidden Love was all the romantic suspense I was beginning to read and the feel for the story that I had been playing with for years . . . it just kind of all finally came together.

3. Do you have a favorite quote about creativity/inspiration etc…? What is it?
Although I do like quotes, there isn’t one that I can call my favorite and recite word for word . . .but I find that quotes that are creative/inspirational give me that little extra boost I need when I am feeling unsuccessful or doubtful or my abilities.

4. What things do you keep in your “writing space”? Do they inspire you? Confound you? Hold wires in place?
This one made me laugh a little because my “writing space” is the lounge piece of my sectional (of which I only have two sections left) sofa. This space has all the pillows and cushions I could possibly need, my writing binder where I keep notes and such, my notebook where my current WIP is kept, whatever book(s) I am reading (because it is never just one), pens of varying colors, my planner, my Kindle Fire, and a stuffed animal or two . . . and it is all situated in front of the tv.

5. What is your perfect “writing space”?
My perfect “writing space” is exactly as described above. I am a person who can write anywhere (i.e. while waiting for my mother’s physical therapy session to be over), but I find that I can – usually – focus best when writing at home surrounded by all that I hold dear to me . . . and easy access to all my various notes and forms of keeping them.

6. If your car horn could play any song, which would it be? Can’t say Dixie.
Hmmmm. . . .that’s a tough one as I have a lot of songs I like. I would probably want my current favorite which is International Love by Pitbull

7. What would you name the first permanent settlement on mars?
Marsville (I’m horrible at naming places!!! LOL)

8. How tall is the perfect sidekick? Please explain why it even matters.
Well, I’m 5’1”, so the perfect sidekick would have to be about 6’ tall. I think it matters because even if you are good at a lot of things, you need someone by your side to compliment that and vice versa – and they have to be taller than you are (at least in my case) to give off a sense of intimidation so that I can sneak in a surprise attack!! No one suspects the little, quiet one.

9. If you were to mess with the time stream, what would you change? Let’s assume a hundred other people already took care of Hitler so you don’t have to say, “Kill Hitler.”
Hmmm . . . that’s a good one . . . .  if we’re talking my own personal time stream, I would probably have taken more risks instead of holding back . . . if we’re talking about historically relevant to the world . . . I don’t know that I would because if I were to mess with things, who’s to say the consequences of those actions wouldn’t be worse than the way the world is now?

10. Let’s say your character has a pet brown bear. What’s the bear’s name?
Bruno

11. If you had to give an antagonist an annoying trait, what would it be?
Constantly tapping things (i.e. pens/pencils on a desk, fingernails against the table . . . for some reason that bothers the crap out of me)

12. What kind of car would your ultimate protagonist drive?
I’m not really into cars (I plan on driving mine till all I have left is the seat and steering wheel LOL), but if I had to pick, I’d probably say something sleek, functional but sexy, with all the latest in technology and then some.

13. You’ve got a year to travel anywhere. Where?
Wow . . . I bet most people can answer this within a blink of an eye – I’ve never been able to as traveling makes me nervous (hell, taking the train to NYC – of which I live 40 mins from by train – can be nerve wracking, not to mention actually navigating down there!!!), but I do want to go to Italy.

14. You just bought a boat with your book fortune. What are you going to call it?
Forbidden

15. What kind of music, if any, gets you typing the fastest?
Almost any of the popular music out there – Pitbull, Eminem (newer stuff), Adele, Lifehouse . . . I have eclectic tastes ranging from classical to hip hop and rap (very selective rap)

16. What’s the punch line to your favorite joke?
This might make me sound boring, but I don’t have a favorite joke.

17. What lyric do you sing poorly, yet loudly?
Since I already know my singing voice sucks, I do not sing out loud . . .

18. You find a portal to another world in your sink’s drain. What is this other world called? And what is the best way to clean the portal so it doesn’t smell like old food?
I would call it Dreamtopia (first thing that came to mind when I read this). As far as cleaning it? Hmmm . . . I would probably use FaBreeze to keep it smelling like a dream and not like last night’s dinner.

19. Where can people learn more about you, your work or any pets you have?
The best place to learn about me is my Facebook page and Twitter feed. On Facebook you can find me here: http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1618907686&__adt=6 and my twitter handle is @mishmash878. Looking forward to meeting new people!!!

20. What’s next?
As Forbidden Love is the first in a trilogy, I am currently working on rewriting the second installment, Is Love Enough. I am also working on learning how to set up a newsletter and while me distributing it monthly once it is up and going.

Hey everyone, this week in Six Sentence Sunday #sixsunday:


Here are six sentences from:
Tortugas Rising

Steve is concerned about Paul having a gun:

“Where in the hell did you get a gun?”
“Academy Sports. As your Head of Security I felt I needed to be prepared.”
“I never made you Head of Security.”
“You never made me your Envoy to the Nudie Bar either, but I diligently fulfill those obligations at least twice a month.”
“Put it away!”

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Thanks for reading
- ben

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Welcome everyone. Here’s the Sweet Saturday Sample: #SweetSat


Taken from
Tortugas Rising

Green turned to white as the waves of the Gulf of Mexico broke against the yacht’s twin bows. Their force smacked with a hollow thud on the fiberglass shell and resonated deep within the ship. Outside, the hull glistened and answered each crest with a thwack that sounded not unlike the slap that was about to knock the drink from Paul Nelson’s hand.

He grinned at the girl. It was a grin that was charming, crooked, filled with confidence and a recent deep whitening treatment. Slurring words had not yet become a problem, and if she liked what he had to say, he would confess that he couldn’t possibly be as drunk as she assumed he was. If she balked at his advances, however, he’d blame it on the booze.

“So, Katherine? Are there any beaches on these islands?”

The smoldering look was worth the stupid question.

“Of course, Mr. Nelson.” Dark hair flowed to her shoulders and framed a slender face. Her blue eyes narrowed as he leaned in close. A gust of wind blew a strand of hair into the corner of her mouth. She brushed it away.

Paul misinterpreted the gesture; he embraced the imagined opening and leaned in closer.

“Paul. Call me Paul.”

“I’m sorry, Mr. Nelson. I’m not allowed to do that. As I was saying, the chain features over four hundred islands, each with at least a quarter mile of white sand beaches reclaimed from Wassaw Sound.”

“What say you and I find a nice, secluded beach when this millionaire’s tub toy puts in?”

“I’m sorry, Mr. Nelson. I can’t do that either.” Katherine Bernelli stepped to one side, opening an avenue of escape. She caught the eye of another investor, nodded, and began to make her way across the yacht’s expansive deck.

Paul stammered as she made her way around him. The charm wasn’t working; he may have to resort to flattery. He studied her as she moved across the deck, but as she walked his concentration swayed away, gently, back and forth in a tailored white formal gown.

Katherine reached another guest and smiled. Paul was amazed; the title Investor Relations Specialist no doubt called for her to smile always; yet he could find no trace of falsity in her eyes.

Paul tried to read her lips as she spoke to a gray-haired old man in a tailored suit. They were all old men with tailored suits. And, with the exception of one man he nicknamed “Johnny-Just-for-Men”, they all had gray hair, which they would undoubtedly refer to as silver.

The swig of Jack registered in his throat, and he moved toward her with a new plan and a new grin.

“Yes, Mr. Hale, I believe the tractor did arrive on your island just yesterday. And, may I say the plantation you built is utterly stunning.”

He smiled back at her as he sipped from a mimosa. “It’s always been a dream of mine to live a simpler life.”

“A hobby farm does sound like fun. And, the soil should be perfectly suited for most any crop.”
“Oh, I’m not going to grow anything. I plan to just sit on the porch with a drink.”
“Oh, but the tractor?”
“Young lady, you can’t have a plantation and not have a tractor.”
“Of course. Well, it is beautiful. Is there anything else I can do for you?”
“Fetch me another drink, sweetie?” He polished off the mimosa and handed her the empty glass.
She smiled, nodded, turned and sighed. The smile faded. She walked into Paul.

“Look, Kat. I’m sorry if I came on strong. I know that your job is to make nice to all the rich and powerful here and that you’re just humoring me. But, I want you to know that I’m not like all these other guests. Look at that guy.” He pointed with his rocks glass to no one specifically. It ended up being “Johnny-Just-for-Men,” who was engaged in conversation on a Bluetooth headset.

“He can’t relax. He’s always on. Look at his posture. He’s standing straight up. His arms behind his back, chest out. Classic steepling. It’s as if he’s dressing down the troops right here.

“But, I’m not like that. I’m not going to posture and preen. I’m up front with who I am. I’m relaxed. I’m fun. For example, underneath this suit, I’m wearing a t-shirt that says ‘Hooray for Boobies!!!’”

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Thanks for reading
- ben

Also, go back and check out the other Sweet Saturday Sample authors.

Aside from interviewing authors, I’ve really tried to stay away from writing about writing on this blog. Even then I’ve tried to focus on the creativity side of things as that’s the part I most enjoy. The topics of writing and e-book marketing are covered well on other sites and I don’t know how much I can really add.

But, I’ve been getting an awful lot of requests lately to talk about writing so I’m breaking down. I’ve no chest to beat or soapbox to stand on however so I’m just opening this up to questions.

So if you have anything you want to ask me about writing or marketing or whatever, fire away and I’ll answer them here.

Thanks for reading.

-ben

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